the story...
You thought I was going to say "Force", didn't you?
As it is, I think I may have...original plan is officially scrapped! I was thinking I could keep the breakdown according to the actual act and scene breakdown according to the play, but it's not going to work out. The second scene was way too short as it turns out, which may be a good thing.
The first scene was easily covered in sixteen pages, but upon looking at the second scene, I've determined that I could finish that book with the second chapter. The second book could also have two chapters, and so forth...ten chapters down from twenty five...not a bad stint of pruning if I do say so myself...
It would be far easier to sell this if it wasn't going to turn into a monstrosity the size of a certain Rowling hardback.
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